SF Sonnet: RHL, ‘Transhuman Evolution’

The humans crowd the riverbanks in cities
while you, would-be transhuman in your boat,
trust to your dreams and luck as on you float,
ignoring all the land’s static committees,
the buildings taller with their strident voices,
the citied banks ever more crammed and loud,
leaders and statues oversize and proud,
fixed in their views. But you see other choices.

And then there’s no more land. Only the sea.
You deso-, iso-, yet e-lated find
after the Desolation of the Years,
sailing and searching past humanity
in the vast oceans of the future mind,
a life within the music of the spheres.

*****

This sonnet has just been published in Space and Time #146, a magazine where fantasy, science fiction, horror and whatever else are presented in a variety of print, online and audio forms. The sonnet owes something to one of my favourite Matthew Arnold poems, ‘The Future‘, which begins

A wanderer is man from his birth.
He was born in a ship
On the breast of the river of time;
Brimming with wonder and joy
He spreads out his arms to the light,
Rivets his gaze on the banks of the stream.


and ends flowing out into the ocean:

As the pale waste widens around him,
As the banks fade dimmer away,
As the stars come out, and the night-wind
Brings up the stream
Murmurs and scents of the infinite sea.


I assume Matthew Arnold limited this vision to the individual life, but I see it also as an image relevant to the progress of the human species into something vaster and unknowably different – not far removed from Nietzsche’s sense of Man as being a bridge between animal and… superman, or transhuman. Not the nasty small-minded punks of Nazi and neo-Nazi superman stupidity, but something far grander in a far larger development towards what life could become.

Photo: “Millennium Dome/O2 Arena from Trinity Buoy Wharf, Blackwall” by wirewiper is licensed under CC BY-NC-ND 2.0.

7 thoughts on “SF Sonnet: RHL, ‘Transhuman Evolution’

      1. Michael Burch's avatarMichael Burch

        Could be a cultural thing. Here we say “oversized” and “supersized.” Without a “d” they become verbs. For instance: “Supersize that Diet Coke, please.” But the rules could be different elsewhere.

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      2. Robin Helweg-Larsen's avatarRobin Helweg-Larsen Post author

        Merriam-Webster allows it:
        oversize adjective
        over·​size ˌō-vər-ˈsīz
        variants or oversized ˌō-vər-ˈsīzd
        Synonyms of oversize
        : being of more than standard or ordinary size
        oversize pillows
        an oversize shirt

        I wonder if there is a difference between things that are supersize from the beginning, versus those that started normal and then were supersized?

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