Short poem: RHL, ‘Flamingo’

As annuals at their lives’ ends flower in beds,
blossom and ripen into yellows and reds
as Earth throws scarlet to the day’s end skies –
so the flamingo trying to fly, pounding along
the surface of the water, pink wings flapping, pink feet slapping,
ungainly straining desperate, then sudden rise,
its work rewarded: scarlet, pink, black, strong,
suddenly graceful, airborne . . . and then gone.

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This short poem was recently published in Lighten Up Online after the editor’s careful query “Could I just check that Ls 5 and 6, which seem to have six beats unlike the others, are intentionally reflecting the awkwardness of the flamingo’s take-off?” Indeed, and I’m glad that it came across that way – thanks, Jerome Betts!

The current Lighten Up Online is a particularly good issue, with many poems far superior to my poor struggling flamingo.

France – Flamingo Landing 04/25/16 Explored” by Benjamin PREYRE Photography is licensed under CC BY-NC-ND 2.0.

2 thoughts on “Short poem: RHL, ‘Flamingo’

  1. addacat's avataraddacat

    Hey, Robin — Loved the flamingo! Here is one I wrote myself — we just need a Flamingo Anthology.

    ONCEOUT OF NATURE

    (IfYeas had sailed to Henderson, Louisiana)

    I’llbe a plastic pink flamingo, stuck

    besidea bayou on construction rod

    legs,cropping Cajun crabgrass. Just my luck!

    Still,at this cabin there’s a kindly god

    whodropped a plaster Virgin at my side.

    Imight be Gabriel, flamingofied.

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