Rondeau: Political Poem: J.D. Smith, ‘Citizen Vain’

Who burned his sled? That would explain
The wisps of hair coiffed like a mane,
The name writ large on thrusting towers,
His rating of his works and powers.
Who wouldn’t take up his refrain?

A loser, say, without a brain
And envious he can’t obtain
Fresh wives imported like cut flowers.
(Who burned his sled?)

A nation may endure a reign
Of fire once tended with some pain
Outlasting its appointed hours
Yet starved, for all that it devours.
The question holds fast like a stain–
Who burned his sled?

*****

J.D. Smith writes: “I try not to say or write the name of the moral homunculus who is currently the 47th President of my country, lest my words get entangled in his omnipresent branding. That said, in verse I have occasionally renounced him and all his works. This poem was first published during the 2016 primary season, when speculating on how that troubled and troubling man became that way was still an interesting parlor game with low stakes. While others with credentials in psychology have discussed his origin story, perhaps most notably in this book, as a poet I gravitated toward metaphor. As some will ask a badly behaved person “Who broke you?” or “Who hurt you?”, I began to wonder ” Who burned his sled?” in the sense of some analog to the loss of Charles Foster Kane’s sled Rosebud in Citizen Kane. What early personal trauma made the current collective trauma possible?”

J.D. Smith’s seventh collection of poetry, The Place That Is Coming to Us, was published in September by Broadstone Books. His first fiction collection, Transit, is available from Unsolicited Press. Further information and occasional updates are available at www.jdsmithwriter.com.

Photo: screenshot from that unbelievably offensive AI-generated video that Trump posted of himself as King Trump in a King Trump fighter-jet, bombing American protesters with his diarrhoea.

3 thoughts on “Rondeau: Political Poem: J.D. Smith, ‘Citizen Vain’

  1. mikerotheatre's avatarmikerotheatre

    PotUS constantly justifies the whims of his policies with the words, “People keep saying to me…”

    WHAT PEOPLE SAY

    is not always the truth, or even near it

    majority’s a concept with two meanings

    numbers and age and yet I often fear it

    is trumpeted by those with rightward leanings

    declaring what is loudest for most sound

    as judgement that should not be overturned

    though others with more reason may have found

    concrete examples that ought to have earned

    consideration since they contradict

    practice and principle of what is urged

    on the strength of strength to avoid conflict

    by sending in soldiers action that verged

    on tyranny – or so some people say

    the ones I’d sooner listen to any day

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