And when we leave this planet, even leave
corporeal necessity behind,
launch in new realms of space, new states of matter,
encapsuled and encoded, searching blind,
who will we find, as we have always found,
those others there before us, unconfined?
How will we meet them, how will we relate,
them settled formlessly, we coming late?
Perhaps I owe an explanation to non-readers of science fiction. The premise of the poem is that we humans will continue to tinker with not just our bodies but our DNA, as we have always experimented with everything. We will produce ever more bizarre manifestations as posthumans, especially useful in off-planet environments (I recommend the short stories of John Varley), ultimately finding ways to exist with intelligence and control without being tied to physical bodies. (Try Vernor Vinge.) But as always, wherever and however we voyage in exploration, we will always find someone (some thing) is there before us. And then there will be all the usual situations that occur with first contact… confusion, lack of communication, miscommunication, trust and distrust, treachery, violence, accommodation, mutual benefit, all the things that social species engage in.
Appropriately this short poem was first published in Bewildering Stories (thanks, Don Webb!), an excellent weekly magazine of speculative stories both short and serialized, and speculative poetry and art. This eight-line poem is structurally pretty basic: it’s in iambic pentameter with the second, fourth and sixth lines rhyming and with a final couplet.
“Jupiter – PJ16-13” by Kevin M. Gill is licensed under CC BY 2.0.
Despite SF not being a preferred genre of mine, I love this poem, and one of the aspects of it that I’ve made a mental note of (perhaps to employ in my own future writing) is that it’s not overburdened with rhyme but contains just enough to make it ‘fly’. I think the final couplet is particularly striking.
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Thanks for the kind words, Richard. It’s a particular pleasure to find a strong last line or couplet… though looking it now, the pronouns seem a little dodgy, don’t you think?
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